原标题：【言语训练】雅思考官泣血引荐干货-雅思大作文套句（二）
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S=subject, Y=year, N=number, F=fact, P=place, M=modifier,O=opinion, st=some time, sb=some body, sth=some thing, sw=some where
36. I believe thatchild-caring should be the responsibility of both parents and that, whilst theroles within that partnership may be different, they are nevertheless equal inimportance. (Test 1, Cambridge2)
I believe that S1 shouldbe the responsibility of S2 and that, whilst S3 may be different,they are nevertheless O.
37. However, thisdoes not mean that the traditional family, with both parents providingemotional support and role-models for their children, is not the mostsatisfactory way of bringing up children. (Test 1, Cambridge 2)
However, this does not meanthat S1, with M, is not the most satisfactory way of F.
38. Of crucial importance, in myopinion, is how we define “responsible for bringing children up”. (Test 1, Cambridge)
Of crucial importance, in my opinion, is how we O.
39. At its simplest,it could mean giving the financial necessary to provide a home, food andclothes and making sure the child is safe and receives an adequate education.(Test 1, Cambridge2)
At its simplest, it could mean S1to provide F1 and S2 is F2.
40. In recent years,there has been a growing body of opinion in favour of putting more resourcesinto health education and preventive measures. (Test 2, Cambridge 2)
In recent years, there has beena growing body of opinion in favour of O.
41. Obviously, thereis a strong human argument for catching any medical condition as early aspossible. (Test 2, Cambridge2)
Obviously, there is a stronghuman argument for O.
42. Statisticsdemonstrate the cost-effectiveness of treating a condition in the early stages,rather than delaying until more expensive and prolonged treatment is necessary.(Test 2, Cambridge2)
Statistics demonstrate Ois necessary.
43. It is certainlytrue that the position of women in society has undergone a dramatic change inthe past twenty years, but I do not feel that this is a direct cause of theindisputable increases in juvenile-related problems during the period. (Test 4,Cambridge 2)
It is certainly true that O1,but I do not feel that O2.
44. It is nowaccepted that young women should find work on leaving school; indeed to rely ontheir parents’ financial support is no longer an option in many families.Likewise, once they get married, the majority of women continue working sincethe financial pressures of setting up a house and establishing a reasonablestandard of living often require two incomes. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)
It is now accepted that O1.Likewise, once they F1, S1 continue F2 since S2require F3.
45. Twenty years agoit was common for women to give up work once they had children and devote theirtime to caring for their children. (Test 4, Cambridge 2)
N years ago it was commonfor S1 to F1 once F.
St ago it was common for sb to do sth once they had todo sth for sb.
46. It is importantto establish the correct balance between family life and working life. (Test 4,Cambridge 2)
It is important to do sthbetween F1 and F2.
47. Happiness is verydifficult to define, because it means so many different things to differentpeople. (Test 2, Cambridge4)
Sth is very difficult to do sth, because it means so manydifferent things to sb.
48. While some peoplelink happiness to wealth and material success, others think it lies in emotionsand loving personal relationships. (Test 2, Cambridge 4)
While sb link sth1to sth2, others think it lies in sth3.
49. Of course,factors such as loving relationships, good health, the skills to earn a livingand a peaceful environment all contribute to our happiness too. (Test 2, Cambridge 4)
Of course, factors such as F all contribute to S too.
Of course, factors such as sth1all contribute to sth2 too.
50. Likeself-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these arethe two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness. (Test2, Cambridge 4)
Like sth, this is alsovery difficult to do sth, but I think these are N factors thatmay be the most important for doing sth.
51. Poor studentbehavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modernlifestyles are probably responsible for this. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)
S seems to be anincreasingly widespread problem and I think that O.
Sth1 seems to be anincreasingly widespread problem and I think that sth2 are probablyresponsible for this.
52. In manycountries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewerchildren. (Test 4, Cambridge4)
In P,S1 is decreasing so that S2 are smaller with fewer S3.
In sw, sth isdecreasing so that sb are smaller with sth.
53. These childrenare often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents donot have the time for this, but in more material ways.
S1 are often F1, not in terms of F2 because S2do not have F3 for this, but in M ways.
54. This means thatthe children grow up without consideration for others and without anyunderstanding of where their standard of living comes from. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)
This means that O.
This means that sb1 growup without sth1 for sb2 and without sth2 of sth3.
55. Teacherscontinually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combatthe situation. (Test 4, Cambridge4)
S1 continually complain about this problem and measures should betaken to combat the situation.
56. The governmentshould fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problemfor individual families, but for society as a whole. (Test 4, Cambridge 4)
S1 should fund F1, because this is no longer a problem forindividual families, but for society as a whole.
57. As a result ofconstant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become starsand celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. (Test 2, Cambridge 6)
As a result of F1, S1 in P have become F2, and F2.
58. Personally, Ithink that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than thehuge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that oursociety places more value on sport than on more essential professions andachievements. (Test 1, Cambridge6)
Personally,I think that O1, but at the same time, it indicates that F.
Personally,I think that sth1 is more justified than sth2, but at the sametime, it indicates that sth3 places more value on sth4.
59. Obviously,education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively betaught to acquire different skills, including those associated with sport, artor music. (Test 1, Cambridge7)
Obviously, S1 are basedon the belief that O, including those associated with F.
60. So from our ownschool experience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that achild can acquire these skills with continued teaching and guided practice.(Test 1, Cambridge7)
So from our own Mexperience, we can find plenty of evidence to support the view that O.
61. In conclusion, Iagree that any child can be taught particular skills, but to be really good inareas such as music, art or sport, then some natural talent is required. (Test1, Cambridge 7)
In conclusion, I agree that O,but to be really good in areas such as S, then F is required.
62. Employees get jobsatisfaction in a number of ways. (Test 3, Cambridge 7)
S get F in a number of ways.
63. Firstly, a personneeds to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positivefeedback from superiors is very important in this respect. (Test 3, Cambridge 7)
Firstly, S need to feelthat O, so F is very important in this respect.
64. Secondly, whensomeone feels they are improving or developing their skills through trainingopportunities, for example, then there is a sense of progression and purposethat rewards a worker. (Test 3, Cambridge7)
Secondly, when S1 feels O1,for example, then there is O2.
65. Satisfaction isalso increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team. (Test 3,Cambridge 7)
S1 is also increased by a sense of responsibility for S2.
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